I thought this was great. Build up of tension and frustration was really well done. I wonder though if instead of the last line it would have worked with him either suddenly realising it was him - because he was in such a fug he hand't realised. Or to change the tone of it altogether - just have the sounds of a crash

Title might not have been in the drop down because it was scheduled for a future date.

I had thought of other endings, but was trying to give the impression he knew what he was doing and wanted it all to end.

I see - poor man he had certainly been through it. Maybe he could just have said 'Goodbye I love you" but there that is just my idea, it was your drabble and I thought it was very well done.

Cheers